Friday, March 27, 2009

FOUND POEM

Take Me Back
By: Katie Kolodziejczyk

Take me back

Seven and Nine back in those years
hearts fluttered

Never any tears

Fallin’ in love with a bad boy

"don't lose your heart yet"

with no intentions at all

They couldn't stop her

She wasn't that little girl anymore

Old and new pictures in frames,

Life is a runaway train

Need you here next to me

Kinda crazy.

PINK- TAYLOR SWIFT
BLUE- TOBY KEITH
GREEN- SUGARLAND

Monday, March 23, 2009

REPITITION OF SOUNDS #2

"Letter To Me"
By: Brad Paisley


If I could write a letter to me


And send it back in time to myself at 17

First I'd prove it's me by saying look under your bed

There's a Skoal can and a Playboy no one else would know you hid

And then I'd say I know it's tough

When you break up after seven months

And yeah I know you really liked her and it just don't seem fair

All I can say is pain like that is fast and it's rare

And oh you got so much going for you going right

But I know at 17 it's hard to see past Friday night

She wasn't right for you

And still you feel like there's a knife sticking out of your back

And you're wondering if you'll survive

You'll make it through this and you'll see

You're still around to write this letter to me

At the stop sign at Tomlinson and Eighth

Always stop completely don't just tap your breaks

And when you get a date with Bridgett make sure the tank is full

On second thought forget it that one turns out kinda cool

Each and every time you have a fight

Just assume you're wrong and dad is right

And you should really thank Mrs. Brinkman

She spent so much extra time

It's like she sees the diamond underneath

And she's polishin' you 'til you shine

And oh you got so much going for you going right

But I know at 17 it's hard to see past Friday night

Tonight's the bonfire rally

But you're staying home instead because if you fail Algebra

Mom and dad will kill you dead

Trust me you'll squeak by and get a C

And you're still around to write this letter to me

You've got so much up ahead

You'll make new friends

You should see your kids and wife

And I'd end by saying have no fear

These are nowhere near the best years of your life

I guess I'll see you in the mirror

When you're a grown man

P.S. go hug Aunt Rita every chance you can

And oh you got so much going for you going right

But I know at 17 it's hard to see past Friday night

I wish you'd study Spanish

I wish you'd take a typing class

I wish you wouldn't worry, let it be

I'd say have a little faith and you'll see

If I could write a letter to me

To me

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Consonance- Green

Assonance- Purple

REPETITION OF SOUNDS #1

"I Told You So"
By Carrie Underwood


VerseI

Suppose I called you up tonight

And told you that I love you

And suppose I said I want to come back home

And suppose I cried and said I think I finally learned my lesson

And Im tired of spending all my time alone

If I told you that I realized you're all I ever wanted

And it's killing me to be so far away

Would you tell me that you love me too

And would we cry together

Or would you simply laugh at me and say...

ChorusI

told you so, Oh I told you so

I told you some day you would come crawling back

And asking me to take you in

I told you so, but you had to go

Now I've found somebody new

And you will never break my heart in two again


VerseII

If I got down on my knees

And told you I was yours forever

Would you get down on yours too and take my hand

Would we get that old-time feeling

Would we laugh and talk for hours

The way we did when our love first began

Would you tell me that you've missed me too

And that you've been so lonely

And you've waited for the day that I returned

And we'd live and love forever

And that I'm your one and only

Or would you say the tables finally turned

would you say

ChorusII

I told you so, Oh I told you so

I told you some day you would come crawling back

And asking me to take you in

I told you so, but you had to go

Now I've found somebody new

And you will never break my heart in two again
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Alliteration- Red


Consonance- Green


Assonance- Purple


Tuesday, March 10, 2009

ANAPHORA

"All Summer Long"

By: Kid Rock



It was 1989, my thoughts were short my hair was long
Caught somewhere between a boy and man
She was seventeen and she was far from in-between
It was summertime in Northern Michigan
Ahh Ahh AhhAhh Ahh Ahh

Splashing through the sand bar
Talking by the campfire
It's the simple things in life, like when and where
We didn't have no internet
But man I never will forget
The way the moonlight shined upon her hair

[Chorus:]

And we were trying different things
We were smoking funny things
Making love out by the lake to our favorite song
Sipping whiskey out the bottle, not thinking 'bout tomorrow
Singing Sweet home Alabama all summer long
Singing Sweet home Alabama all summer long

Catching Walleye from the dock
Watching the waves roll off the rocks
She'll forever hold a spot inside my soul
We'd blister in the sun
We couldn't wait for night to come
To hit that sand and play some rock and roll
While we were trying different things
And we were smoking funny things
Making love out by the lake to our favorite song
Sipping whiskey out the bottle, not thinking 'bout tomorrow
Singing Sweet Home Alabama all summer long
Singing Sweet Home Alabama all summer long

Now nothing seems as strange as when the leaves began to change
Or how we thought those days would never end
Sometimes I'll hear that song and I'll start to sing along
And think man I'd love to see that girl again

[Repeat Chorus x2]

Singing Sweet Home Alabama all summer long
Singing Sweet Home Alabama all summer long
Singing Sweet Home Alabama all summer long
Singing Sweet Home Alabama all summer long

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This song by Kid Rock is about a teenage couple's summer love and how it turned into the sweetest of memories for them. He recalls his favorite parts of that summer and states "I'd love to see that girl again". An example of an Anaphora is "We were trying different things, we were smoking different things". This is an example because the first part in each line is repeated the same. It enhances the song because it just fits in the right places where as other songs if continuously says the same verse over and over again it gets boring and annoying.

Monday, March 9, 2009

EPISTROPHE

"That's a Man"
by Jack Ingram





Saw a story on the local news last night
About one more struggling single mother
She was talking about how hard it is getting by
With no help, no money, no nothing from the baby's father
Made me think about this guy I know with a wife and a child
Who's working two jobs just to get by
Yeah, he says he'd do anything he could in this world
Just to give his young family a better life;
yeah, a better life

Oh, that's a man

That's a 19-year-old, modern-day hero man
Those two young Marines over there fighting for their country
Man, they're gonna be friends forever
They've both come back eventually
But as bonds and destiny would have it
They don't come back together
Yeah, the one who lived to tell about
Why he can't even talk about it
Keeps fighting that fight up there in his head
Ain't a day goes by he don't wonder why

Why it wasn't me instead
It could've been me instead

Oh, that's a man

That's a you don't know how hard he tried to save his buddy's life man
I don't know about you
Sometimes, I just need a little reminder
And reach down and find some understanding
Find some kind of kindness


Read about a man who said his family
Had been farming the same land in Ohio for 100 years
Felt like he'd paid for it ten times over
With his own blood, his own sweat, and his own tears
If he had to, he'd be out there on that tractor working
Seven long, hot days a week

Yeah, he's the kind of feller that people get real quiet
When he stands up in church to speak
They know when he speaks

Oh, that's a man

That's a stand tall, walk straight
Put God's share in the collection plate man

Oh, that's a man

Oh, that's a man
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This song is about the definition of a "real man". It speaks about the hardships and bravery each man in this song went through to make him real strong by caring about other people rather then themselves. An example of Epistrophe is the line "Why it wasn't me instead, It could've been me instead". This is an Epistrophe because it has the same endings repeated.I don't like the repeated verse the writter brought to this song when it says "Why it wasn't me instead, Could of been me instead" I think they could have come up with something better to start up the courus with a big bang and make the song more fast and fun.